December 15, 2010
Location: Milwaukee Art Museum
Description: walking into the Chamber
For years, I have been waiting to see what it was like. They said that you will be breathless, you can't take you eyes out of it. That it was unimaginable. In the 1960's it was a predominant hit, you couldn't miss it. It was so popular and so well known, it was suddenly suppressed in a short period of time. It disappeared like dust. Since the 20th century came, we moved on to greater things, like cell phones and hybrid cars. It was an immense moment in history and also a gloomy time for many people on the attacks. We don't care about it anymore, but I, I do. I am a detective, working for the private service , I don't know what my operation is, but whatever it is, it has something to do with that thing, the Infinity Chamber, the Chamber of Dreams.
Dreams. That was the key word. Something had to do with all this commotion. 2 weeks ago, One man was found in a serious coma in the Chamber, we don't know what happened to him, but he was a aesthetician, a person who studies the art. He was doing some research all around the museum, but when he got to the Infinity Chamber. He stepped inside, and there was something in there, something that doesn't like people, a murderer I would say. The mans name was Dr. Julius. He died just yesterday, it happened unexpectedly, just like that. I know something is not right, something does not want us to go in the Infinity Chamber. And I am going to find out what.
Location: Milwaukee Art Museum
Description: walking into the Chamber
For years, I have been waiting to see what it was like. They said that you will be breathless, you can't take you eyes out of it. That it was unimaginable. In the 1960's it was a predominant hit, you couldn't miss it. It was so popular and so well known, it was suddenly suppressed in a short period of time. It disappeared like dust. Since the 20th century came, we moved on to greater things, like cell phones and hybrid cars. It was an immense moment in history and also a gloomy time for many people on the attacks. We don't care about it anymore, but I, I do. I am a detective, working for the private service , I don't know what my operation is, but whatever it is, it has something to do with that thing, the Infinity Chamber, the Chamber of Dreams.
Dreams. That was the key word. Something had to do with all this commotion. 2 weeks ago, One man was found in a serious coma in the Chamber, we don't know what happened to him, but he was a aesthetician, a person who studies the art. He was doing some research all around the museum, but when he got to the Infinity Chamber. He stepped inside, and there was something in there, something that doesn't like people, a murderer I would say. The mans name was Dr. Julius. He died just yesterday, it happened unexpectedly, just like that. I know something is not right, something does not want us to go in the Infinity Chamber. And I am going to find out what.
That's good! You also did your piece based off the Infinity Chamber >:p. Just one suggestion: Don't jump right in and say he is a CIA agent; lead the reader to it (using context clues, or course) I hope this small suggestion helps!
ReplyDeleteNice job it's ironic how something simple as a box full of lights can spark a great piece such as this
ReplyDeleteI like how you turned such a simple object into a divine piece
ReplyDeleteI agree with everyone who commented before this. You did a really good job! This piece was really descriptive and helped make it more interesting for the reader. You took something that is in a local art museum and made it a whole different world. I really like the mystery aspect to this piece also! Very well done!
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